Design Rough
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From Autumn Mariano:
"You're concept rough looks good. The type in the definitions really compliments your masthead. Is it the same font? The placement of your markers is effective and clean, but I would consider numbering them so it's easier to understand.
Other than that, it might be nice to try and move more towards a concept. A phrase like "go skateboard" really lends itself to some cool imagery. That might make this poster be more appealing to skateboarders (if that's your intended audience)."
Response:
I agree that I need to list which terms and definitions go together, and I do agree that I need to push a concept, and I will definitely think about something that I could relate to skateboarders.
Design Tight Rough
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From Autumn Mariano:
"Good work on the tight rough Nic. The numbering will really help the reader understand the information, and I like the way you've divided up the space using those black bars. I would try thinking of a way to emphasize that division between the masthead and the term definitions. Keep working with the idea of a skateboarding concept, I still think there is a lot of potential there."
Response:
I'm still thinking of a concept to try and push the skateboard theme towards. I tried putting little skateboards as the highlights of the terms, but that didn't work. I will make the text smaller, pull the masthead down and give some space at the top as well, as well as think of a theme that could compliment the skateboard concept.
Design Comp Rough
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Design Comp
Design Final Comp
